
Mr. Romero I want you to grade me on my Intro&conclusion and my transitions.
Have you ever wanted something so bad that you couldn't wait for it can happen. Well that's how I feel about graduating in the year of 2012.
My first reason why I am graduating in 2012 is becuase of my family. My family helps me with my homework. My family also gives me advice for the hard times I go through. For example one time when I got in trouble at school my mom told me to keep my head up and keep going.
The second reason why I am going to graduate in 2012 is becuase of my friends. My friends help me study and go over my work. And also my friends help me stay on track. For example my friends at my old school all came together to help each other study and give advice. That's how my friends will help me.
My third reason why I will graduate in 2012 is becuase of myself. Everyday I tell myself not to be just a statistic. I tell myself to keep pushing when the roads get rough. When life gets hard I try to keep my cool and slide through it.
These are the reasons why I hope and dream so bad to graduate in 2012. I hope you graduate also.
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